ECED11- "I Will Be Still"

I Will Be Still  
author: Rosa Faye Velicaria.

            There is a traveler named Roby. Roby always gathered such documentary activities that are why as a part of his job he enters a cave. Like any other typical cave, it is dark. He expects that there are unusual things to encounter; there are bats, group of harmful insects, fossils and theirs muddy surfaces. Roby thought that he is through to observe the cave. He decided to go out of the cave. Unfortunately he cannot recall all of the areas of the cave for this place is dark he finds it difficult to see the light, he almost die because of the strange. Roby still feels the hope in his heart, that he will see the right way. He said to his self “I will be still… I know it is according to his purpose”. Then the man is praying and praying. Days past “He answered my prayer” he cries as he sees the light towards his way. He’s kneeling and said “My God thank you, you would never leave me and I knew it.”

The weak points

            Technically the short story is written and flows through the optimistic views of the character. But it’s not the real things that happen for a man that he will not even questioned the Lord why God let this sufferings happened to me. As readers noticed he is just pursuing to come out of the cave.

The strong points

            The title flowered with the phrase “I will be still” and the character shown strong belief that he will be still without a doubt.

The message

            God always exist. He will make away, even we cannot see.

Relate to myself

            I can relate myself in the story because I am a Christian and I’m holding on with my faith. Sometimes as a human being I can’t get anxious easily to the challenges in my life but still I know he will answer my prayer.

Moral Lesson

            Bee consistent for what you believe. Your success is based on your faith.

BEED 3B